Friday 12 March 2021

When I'm... poem


This is my 'When I'm...' poem. I enjoyed writing it. The hardest part was adding the extra 9 year old bit. What is your favourite age line?


5 comments:

  1. Kia ora CJ,
    Wow that's a lot of writing you did its really funny to read to I laughed a lot! My favourite part you did was when your gonna be 21, because its funny at the end that you will chill in bed all day!
    What will you do when your 22?
    Blog you later!
    Emma

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    1. When I'm 22 I will try make my own car. Would you like to make a poem like this?
      bye bye :D :-D %-D

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  2. Hi Cj Jed here,I like your poem because it is filled with interesting stuff and bad stuff like staying home from school. Overall it was very fun to read and think about. But I think you could take away the b at the 16. Have you ever been to mexico blog ya later.

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  3. Hello Cj,
    I like your poem because it has lots of interesting things that you will do when you grow up. I really like When you are 19 years old your going to start a youtube channel for gaming at the age of 19. What are you gonna do when your 23?. Blog you later

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    1. Thanks for commenting on my blog bye bye

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